I think the walls look a little flat but otherwise it’s a pretty good build!
Randinator9 on
It needs chimneys. All old factories have at least one massive chimney, even if it’s only there for decorative purposes
SunderingAlex on
Shaders /j
I think this is great. No critiques. It feels off because of its environment, not the structure. It needs to be surrounded with like buildings and some infrastructure. Roads, lamp posts, maybe a water wheel.
moonjena on
Maybe add some water spouts on corners xD
Batata-Sofi on
Chimneys and maybe make the roof slightly steeper because they look like stairs a little bit.
New_Astronomer_7595 on
Great build! Love it!
WitchyMinecrafter on
Make cracks in the walls in certain places, I think there’s tutorials on it, also don’t be afraid to add regular granite in certain spots of crumble brick…add lamppost on the side, use iron or oxide copper bars and a lantern on top for the pathway, benches, and a dumpster
Boss_player0 on
Lacks detailing, use block gradients that go well with granite, andesite, base cobble, stuff like that, the walls appear flat, and maybe a giant chimney on one corner or something
Zomflower48 on
baby Villagers
NeanderStaal on
I don’t know how to go about it exactly, but make it dirty. It’s so sparkly clean, and factories generally aren’t.
TheMostlyReasonable1 on
I think some chimneys with campfires in them would be a nice addition. Also, the walls seem a little flat, so maybe you could swap out some of the bricks with a similar block like granite to give it more variety.
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I think the walls look a little flat but otherwise it’s a pretty good build!
It needs chimneys. All old factories have at least one massive chimney, even if it’s only there for decorative purposes
Shaders /j
I think this is great. No critiques. It feels off because of its environment, not the structure. It needs to be surrounded with like buildings and some infrastructure. Roads, lamp posts, maybe a water wheel.
Maybe add some water spouts on corners xD
Chimneys and maybe make the roof slightly steeper because they look like stairs a little bit.
Great build! Love it!
Make cracks in the walls in certain places, I think there’s tutorials on it, also don’t be afraid to add regular granite in certain spots of crumble brick…add lamppost on the side, use iron or oxide copper bars and a lantern on top for the pathway, benches, and a dumpster
Lacks detailing, use block gradients that go well with granite, andesite, base cobble, stuff like that, the walls appear flat, and maybe a giant chimney on one corner or something
baby Villagers
I don’t know how to go about it exactly, but make it dirty. It’s so sparkly clean, and factories generally aren’t.
I think some chimneys with campfires in them would be a nice addition. Also, the walls seem a little flat, so maybe you could swap out some of the bricks with a similar block like granite to give it more variety.
Add campfires on top of hay bales in the tubes